Sickness
I feel
Poor emotions
I feel
Cold and bitter emotions
I feel
Sickness
In my eyes in the morning sun
Sickness
I feel
Words not spoken
Sickness
Only shared through telepathy
Sickness
Not talking to you
Sickness
Talking to myself
Sickness
Hatred towards myself
Sickness
Pain and joy
Sickness
Laughter and games
Sickness
Captivated thoughts
Sickness
In my eyes
Sickness
Blood from my nose
Sickness
Blood from my hands
Dislike
Sickness
and pain by no any other name, but painful beginnings and a painful end.
16 comments:
I like the rhythm of this piece. It is disturbing in the best possible way.
Rebekah Cadman - Thank you.. Thanks for reading.
very very moving! beautifully sorrowful! jenean
gypsywoman - Thank you kindly!:0
worrysome words, but the style... excellent!
Shadow - Thank you!
Read between the lines and I see a heart riddled with pain and hurt. Anyone who writes...truly writes...knows any piece one writes has a certain amount of themselves portrayed. I will pray for you friend. I pray the Lord bring you peace amidst whatever life has brought your way and that joy not chase pain, but that joy would be the victor and leave pain in the dust!
Shannon Jacobyansky - Thank you! BUt to be honest, it was not about me. It was an average human being I see around me. I been observing and paying attention. I am so freaking happy, things couldn't be better.
'Hatred towards myself
Sickness'
Yes, that can be relevant.
I think everyone can relate to having at least experienced one of the symptoms embedded in your poem. A small peek into the suffering that many people endure. Nice work.
G. - Thanks. That is what I was trying to convey.
thekingpin68 - I think so!:)
I'm glad to know things are going well for you!
Shannon Jacobyansky - Thank you for caring and thinking about me.
I like the way your blog site is set up. Very nice!
Leon, thanks for the encouragement!
Jeff - Thank you!:)
satire and theology - Anytime! This is why I am here!:) Let me know if you need more:0
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